Wednesday, August 10, 2011

Row80 Midweek check in - plodding

July 4 to September 22

Slow and steady seems to be my mantra lately.   Writing is a lot like doing the treadmill..slow and steady will get you there.   I also discovered that doing the treadmill for an hour at zero grade versus 30 minutes at 6.5 grade equals out in calories and it is less painful on my ankles.  Thank goodness for my nook.   According to our fearless leader Kait we are about halfway there.  I'm hoping, fingers crossed (virtually) will be done with the first draft of Red Thief by the end of this round come September 22nd.   Pretty much have decided won't be doing NaNoWriMo this year.  Really need to concentrate on editing the next round.  Watch me eat my words later when a really neat story idea comes up. 

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Monday, August 8, 2011

Centuries of June by Keith Donohue



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Keith Donohue


Synopsis: "Set in the bathroom of an old house just before dawn on a night in June, Centuries of June is a black comedy about a man who is attempting to tell the story of how he ended up on the floor with a hole in his head. But he keeps getting interrupted by a series of suspects—eight women lying in the bedroom just down the hall. Each woman tells a story drawn from five centuries of American myth and legend in a wild medley of styles and voices.   Centuries of June is a romp through history, a madcap murder mystery, an existential ghost story, and a stunning tour de force at once ingenious, sexy, inspiring, and ultimately deeply moving."

I'll admit when I first heard about Centuries of June and read the first few pages on Amazon, I was intrigued.  However, as I got more into the story, began to wonder what is the point.  Something I rarely do...usually can determine quite quickly the point of most stories.  I almost skipped to the end but decided to stick it out.  The ending was a bit of a let down.   At the beginning of the story, Jack is hit on the head as he enters the bathroom.  He comes to finding someone that resembles his father and a bit of Samuel Beckett as well sitting on the side of the tub.   The man demands some whiskey for his dry throat and in the process of going downstairs, Jack sees 7 naked women lying in his bed.   It gives him food for thought as he goes downstairs to get the drink.   The time stays eternally 4'ish in the morning and the majority of the action takes place in the bathroom.   His father saves him from being beaned in the head by the first woman who appears and then tells her story.   Progressively each woman appears in an attempt to kill him, but then calms down and tells their story.  

Their stories are a mixture of history delving into different time periods and fiction beginning with Dolly who tells the story about a native American woman who married a bear. There is Jane who disguised herself as a cabin boy on a ship of colonists during the 1400's and ends up marooned on a island.  Alice, accused of witchcraft during the Salem Witch trials.  Marie whose entire body is covered in written tattoos which the father must read off her body to share her story about slavery and eventual freedom.   Flo during the gold rush era and Bunny, a femme fetale who cheat on her husband and tried to get her lover to kill him.  So what does this all have to do with Jack and ultimately the 7th woman still lying in the bed asleep.  It turns out he was the leading man in all their stories and by telling him, hope he will get it right in the next life. Because yes he is dead once again and will be moving on in an attempt to maybe get it right in the next life and have learned how to treat women with a bit more respect. 

Pros - the story is well written and the mythology and history recognizable. Con's - it got a bit tedious with each woman trying to kill him and the gab fest taking place in the bathroom between each of the stories until they were done.  The ending as I said was a bit of a disappointment.   If you like odd, existential ghost type like stories, then you'll probably enjoy it. 


Pages:  352
Publisher: Crown
Released:  May 31, 2011
Other thoughts:

In the Next Room:
"In the end, there are two sides to Centuries of June by Keith Donohue- the surreal and the human, and although I far preferred the historical stories to narrators' mystery, the entire novel offers quirky and intelligent writing that definitely has me intrigued to see what other oddities are in Donohue's repertoire."


FyreFly's Book Blog:
"I think Centuries of June would be worth reading for anyone who enjoys the story-within-a-story format, especially if they like their fiction literary, abstract, and a touch bizarre."



Sunday, August 7, 2011

Sunday Salon: Education, reading mojo and Row80


Quick Row 80 Update:  Plugging away on WIP Red Thief.  Totally failed with morning pages - haven't been doing them at all.  *sigh*  Want to see how others are doing click here.

Life has gotten in the way this week with birthdays, father getting a cold, plus one of my technician's (who always manages to get whatever illness ten times worse) catching it, resulting in me having to work part of Friday and cover Saturday.  Thank goodness for my other technician who was able to cover and handle things at the shop on Friday afternoon.  I'm also in the midst of planning 6th grade and have been researching curriculum.  

Thought I'd see what the school system is using for science and interestingly enough, they have online textbooks and lessons.  Though James is computer savvy, the one thing he doesn't want to do is lessons online.  He's a have it in front of him, hands on, give me a workbook, type of learner.  Although he loves computer and video games and researches the heck out of them online, the same doesn't go for formal education.  He doesn't equate one with the other and believe me, I've tried.  Telling him, even showing him how to apply how he learns about his games to educational things and suddenly I'm getting the "duh" looks.  The computer is purely pleasure for him and he doesn't want to mix business with pleasure. 

He has to be able to touch it, see it, and feel it.  I'm almost at the point with all the stuff I've collected over the past couple years, that we're going to have an eclectic year, especially with science.  Makes it a bit harder and time consuming to put together, but the ends justify the means. Once I get it all figured out, will post what we will be doing for 6th grade.  

Speaking of James, check out his latest blog story - Yoshi Adventure.  He has quite an imagination. 

The Sunday Salon.com


Reading wise, I think my decision making mojo has up and gone.  The last few reviews books I've chosen and read, haven't liked.  Centuries of June by Keith Donohue found myself asking what is the point and wanting to skip to the end.  Everything Beautiful Began After by Simon Van Booy ended up skimming half the book.  The point of view switched midpoint to second person point of view - the narrator talking to "you" as the character and totally threw me out of the story. My reviews will up later this week with a bit more detail.   At least my saving grace is Lori Foster - one of my favorite steamy romantic suspense authors.  I received her latest series - The Men Who Walk the Edge of Honor and going to start reading the first book "When You Dare."     Next up in my A to Z challenge by Author is - Dr. Zhivago by Boris Pasternak - and by Title - Night Road by Kristin Hannah


In the quest to read 52 Books in 52 weeks it is book week 32 and highlighting Ralph Waldo Emerson on the 52 Books blog.


Something neat I discovered this week online over at Rachelle Gardner's blog - WordServe Water Cooler.
A new group author blog from Rachelle's Wordserve Literary agency with Jody Hedlund, Karen Witemeyer, Rachelle Gardner, Katie Ganshert.  Be sure to check it out. 


Have a great week and happy reading and writing!

Saturday, August 6, 2011

Happy 80th Birthday MOM!



A mother is the truest friend we have, when trials heavy and sudden, fall upon us; when adversity takes the place of prosperity; when friends who rejoice with us in our sunshine desert us; when trouble thickens around us, still will she cling to us, and endeavor by her kind precepts and counsels to dissipate the clouds of darkness, and cause peace to return to our hearts.

-- Washington Irving





Love you to infinity and beyond - Happy Birthday!

Wednesday, August 3, 2011

ROW80 midweek check in -- escape!

Hide and Seek courtesy of  Faithful Chant

I've been going back and forth on how going to get to the great escape scene and finally hit the set up point today. The lead up to it didn't turn out like expected and actually surprised me.  I sat there a moment thinking - well, that was interesting.  Guess you just gotta have faith in your characters and let them lead.  That's it darlings.  Check out how everyone is doing here.

Tuesday, August 2, 2011

Teaser Tuesdays: Centuries of June

"Motionless on the edge of the tub, the figure of my father sat in the exact spot.  A tiny pinfeather stuck out like a flag from the prodigious wrinkle of his brow.  He did not drain his glass in a single gulp as might be expected of the parched.  Rather, he held the tumbler to the light, judged the liquid's clarity, sniffed its bouquet, rinsed his palate with a mouthful and only then swallowed.  The whiskey warmed him, brightened his eye, and raised the flow of blood to his pale skin.  He sipped another mouthful and the dryness vanished from his breathing, and he looked almost alive.  When he cleared his throat again, no feathers flew out of his mouth."    pg 10




Centuries of June by Keith Donohue

Teaser Tuesdays is a weekly bookish meme, hosted by MizB of Should Be Reading. Anyone can play along.